Ain't 20 (no more)(?)

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SupJax
Germany
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28 mar 2019
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Song is from ©2013. Description: (Fk off, and don't come back.), This was the first title intended, thanks to Major for helping out with a more suitable name here. I want some lyrics. Forget about the title, I want some lyrics. You know what this is about. Girls and Fools. Like me and you. *Check out Majors vocal add with the lyric sheet(?) from DrStrgeglv that is posted down here, so many questions
DrStrgeglv
Not Like That

Look at where we are
You slide ahead of me
I can smell the steam
Drifting from your hair
I am onto you
Pull me along
As though I am one of those
As though I am one of those
You see me as any other
Never turn to discover
The one in tow
Steady as we go
It's not like that
Not like that
Listen thoughtfully
Take in all degrees
Turn your face to me
Now we are aligned
The leash hangs equally
Between you and me
But it's not like that
Not like that
You slide ahead of me
I am onto you
As though you are one of those
As though you are one of those
But it's not like that
Not like that
Listen thoughtfully
Take in all degrees
This was not for me
Never meant to be
Save your empathy
Although you needed me
Only distantly
Not like that
Not like that
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28 marzo 2019 alle ore 22:56
SupJax
SupJax Wow yes, that's great. It comes a little off my attention or expectation, because it's not a love song. The first thought is good
Now we got to highlight the being of >>Ain't 20, no more<<. Think of the very known "be used". I'm not someone who steps back. Like a weak skill, step back, shut up, and please your partner. Whether good times, or bad. You keep your line, with the intention of a good relationship. If it's sex, or even, more.

Now we got to focus the harsh part. You keep cool and be straight - and it changes nothing. She(or he) does not accept or recommend you as the being you are. Protecting, the pleasure, the shield, the goods, the swallow lol. I know it's tough, but at some point, you just got the option to leave. That's it
+2
28 marzo 2019 alle ore 23:00
DrStrgeglv
DrStrgeglv Editing as we go? +3
28 marzo 2019 alle ore 23:20
SupJax
SupJax The first part is really nice. 14 lines
Oh yea I like that. It's really onpoint

Wow, crazy thing Doctr, that's some lyric right to the ground. There was one thing in the end, "Thought you needed me, but It's not like that".
Not sure if we should change that. Because with my experience, it was; " You needed me, but could not accept".
+2
30 marzo 2019 alle ore 21:16
DrStrgeglv
DrStrgeglv Ok... fixed? +1
Major 3rd
flamenco sounding. Nice work! I like the 2nd guitar syncopation..:W super cool:W:) "girls & fools like me & you" LOL Ain't that the truth...cheers +2
fblack
Very good my friend, :D :Y it sounds to me between Spanish flamenco and Argentine folklore! :Y +2
29 marzo 2019 alle ore 00:04
SupJax
SupJax Yea. Some say that. I don't know where it comes from, I'm far not spanish or eastern mode human being. Anyway. Like that? :) +2
29 marzo 2019 alle ore 00:07
fblack
fblack No matter friend, that comes from within !! :D:) +2
29 marzo 2019 alle ore 00:15
SupJax
SupJax Haha, cheers :D +2
DrStrgeglv
Very nice! What do you want the lyrics to say? +1
28 marzo 2019 alle ore 21:59
Major 3rd
Major 3rd girls and fools...lol it should be easy for us all...;O) +3
28 marzo 2019 alle ore 22:00
DrStrgeglv
DrStrgeglv Girls On Fools! +2
28 marzo 2019 alle ore 22:01
Mikebanez
Mikebanez lol:o +1
28 marzo 2019 alle ore 22:02
Major 3rd
Major 3rd LOL yeah! +3
28 marzo 2019 alle ore 22:03
SupJax
SupJax Ah. The first thought here was, "You treat me like anybody, but I'm not just somebody, I got you up, and you still look behind, evils from the past"
Some better translation could be a help. Haha. It's about someone that can't deal with the past, and treats you like all the fools before. You got really into it, but at some point, there's no help. "I won't be your .. What you gonna say here.. your pendant"? Not sure about that
Thanks guys. I think this is a good tone here
+2
28 marzo 2019 alle ore 22:35
DrStrgeglv
DrStrgeglv She doesn't appreciate him. He wants to be respected. She plays his emotions, but he ain't one of those fools who accepts that. He still wants her, but not like that! +2
Mikebanez
this is great:D Nice job brother:W +1
28 marzo 2019 alle ore 22:08
SupJax
SupJax Thanks thanks. It's an oold~ one. Old as human being. You're welcome +1
abuitremorem
Soulful! Fantastic what you are doing there. Can I have some more, please.:D +1
29 marzo 2019 alle ore 20:53
SupJax
SupJax Maybe ;) +2
Ernie440
Great tune!! IMpressed!! :O:W +1
30 marzo 2019 alle ore 15:53
SupJax
SupJax Cool thanks :) +1
axenvocs
Sick brother incredible yeah :W <3 +1
30 marzo 2019 alle ore 15:53
SupJax
SupJax Oi. :D +1
PDMuzak
Very nimble playing indeed. Great acoustic work.. B) +1
30 marzo 2019 alle ore 15:54
SupJax
SupJax Thanks for the little note :) +0
peatric
great guitar SupJax<3:W
sorry:o
+1
30 marzo 2019 alle ore 15:57
SupJax
SupJax Sure it was the right jam? :D Yes, Banez had some very cool ideas on it :) +0
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