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Seifenblasen versperren mir die Sicht ich glotze in das bunte Auge es sieht mich nicht hält sich verschlossen .. ich halte die Luft an der Weg führt nach unten … nicht mal ein Seepferd, auch nicht nach Stunden dann wieder oben betäubt Rosenduft mir die Sinne und entdecke nicht weit von hier eine seltsame Spinne fass mir ein Herz und steh endlich auf der Nebel verzieht sich so langsam auch … Ich sollte mal wieder baden, während die Waschmaschine läuft! © akchen 2015
AKchen
new born

Bubble obstruct my vision
I stare into the colorful eye
it does not see me
holds closed ..

I hold my breath
the way is down
... Not even a sea horse,
even after hours

then back up
stunned rose fragrance me the meaning
and discover
not far from here a strange spider

brief me a heart
and finally stand on
the fog lifts so slowly
also
...
I should bathe once again,
while the washing machine is running! +1
Mishteria
Very nice!! +1
10 febbraio 2015 alle ore 19:34
AKchen
AKchen thank you ;) +1
ericblom
Ich fühle mich sehr geehrt wegen Ihren Beitrag. Sehr schön, danke. +1
10 febbraio 2015 alle ore 19:35
AKchen
AKchen du bist verrückt ;) ich veehre deinen add !! Danke :) +1
paulus
Super +1
10 febbraio 2015 alle ore 19:35
AKchen
AKchen danke :) +1
woXey
wow what a trip... that was something.. :) very cool A :D +1
11 febbraio 2015 alle ore 07:27
AKchen
AKchen :D thank you +0
MajorTom_III
very nice +1
11 febbraio 2015 alle ore 07:28
AKchen
AKchen thanks :) +1
ivax
muy bueno akchen +1
11 febbraio 2015 alle ore 07:28
AKchen
AKchen thank you :) +0
josepssv
Hehe, it's super fun Surrealism and Dadaism in these times. +1
11 febbraio 2015 alle ore 07:26
AKchen
AKchen :) happy, you see the fun it the thing ... I do not care about nowadays dadaism, you´re informed better ... I don´t have a clue ;) +0
11 febbraio 2015 alle ore 14:33
josepssv
josepssv Not exactly. It is a personal appreciation.
Now with the intensive use of audiovisual language we can create a narrative from small pieces that once seemed disjointed.
Automatic writing of Tzara and Breton like but with pessimistic ideas.
Your text is more positive (and fun) +0
allgirl
kool add, akchen +1
josepssv
La burbuja obstruye mi visión
Me quedo en el ojo colorido
que no me ve
se mantiene cerrada ..

Aguanto la respiración
el camino es hacia abajo
... Ni siquiera un caballito de mar,
incluso después de una hora

a continuación, una copia de seguridad
aturdida fragancia al significado de Rose
y descubrir
no lejos de aquí una extraña araña

informarme corazón
y, finalmente, de pie sobre
la niebla se levanta lentamente
también
...
Debo de bañarme una vez más,
mientras que la lavadora está en marcha! +1
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