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WanHu
Scotland
Voce & Chitarra acustica:
WanHu 143 jams
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16 feb 2024 Ascoltata:
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This is my first attempt at getting this new song into some kind of order. Musically, it's very rudimentary and I could use some tips on getting it to flow better. It's a love song to the planet, I think. I dunno, I just write the stuff.
hartmut
wonderfully made WanHu! +2
WanHu
WanHu Thanks, hartmut :) +1
Shamika
Lots of reasons to enjoy this song WanHu. Interesting story, a great, steady vocal and a clever little connecting guitar riff. Well done :) +1
slin
a really awesome song and vocal fantastic text Ian your are a fantastic singer.;)<3 +1
WanHu
WanHu Thanks, Nils. Good to hear from you:) +1
shiihs
This sounds pretty impressive already. You sing very well! I don't think this music would benefit from a too complex arrangement. Perhaps one tip (since you explicitly asked for some tips) when singing "turbulence" around 1:41, I would prolong the "u" instead of the "r" sound so "tuuuuurbulence instead of "turrrrrrbulence". +1
WanHu
WanHu Thanks shiihs. I've afraid the extended rrrrrr... is going to have to stay, I still have a Glasgow accent but I haven't lived in the city for 40 years:| +0
Navota
sounds great<3 +1